Hello Everybody,
I'm glad to be on the Tentmaker forums. The Site has given me a lot of hope in my gradual, years-long conversion to the Universalist Gospel. In order to spread the Gospel, I have written a brief, 37-page essay which makes 5 Biblical cases for Universalism. I would be highly appreciative for any feedback and constructive criticism. I also seek to learn new ideas from the forums themselves. The essay is attached in a Word doc below. Thank you all.
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Brian:
I have a fair amount of experience at editing and literary criticism. I'll take a look at your "brief" essay, and give you some general comments. A closely-edited, proofread review will require me to send a hard copy back to you, with all my markings and scribbles. I did the same for a friend's unpublished novel. I think several people associated with Tentmaker are involved with essays and/or books. I'm writing an essay on Hell (Hell is a 404) and a book on the Bride of Christ, titled "Chosen."
EDIT: My full answer will probably be slow in coming, as my wife and I are in the middle of a move, and I spend hours of each day packing boxes. Others will surely answer first, and that's OK with me. I did skim the essay quickly and it looks very professional, well organized, and it's even copyrighted (good!).
Thank you for your offer to help, I really appreciate it. Best of luck with the move!
Hi Brian,
I downloaded your essay and look forward to reading it. I will let you know what I think, but probably can't promise a thorough and in depth analysis. I'll be in touch. Thanks for sharing!
Jon
Quote from: Brian Larrimore on February 08, 2014, 05:01:45 AM
Hello Everybody,
I'm glad to be on the Tentmaker forums. The Site has given me a lot of hope in my gradual, years-long conversion to the Universalist Gospel. In order to spread the Gospel, I have written a brief, 37-page essay which makes 5 Biblical cases for Universalism. I would be highly appreciative for any feedback and constructive criticism. I also seek to learn new ideas from the forums themselves. The essay is attached in a Word doc below. Thank you all.
Hi Brian, I have begun reading your essay. Perhaps if you have time you may want to read mine at www.hell-is-a-myth.webs.com (http://www.hell-is-a-myth.webs.com) , particularly the 3 entries "Hell is a Myth", "All in All", and "The Fire of God". They are relatively short. Then we can chat about our perceptions. In the meantime I will read your essay a couple times over the next couple days. Peace, John