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Title: a poem
Post by: gatheredfragments on October 08, 2007, 08:31:12 AM
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01/29/2006
I can see it now
You on a cross
Going to hell
To help ~me~ out
To destroy a demon
And free my soul.
I see you bleeding
And forgiving me
While I throw stones.
No, you are not Him
Only a human being
Who by God's grace
Laid down your life
And showed me Jesus' face.


VLW
Title: Re: a poem
Post by: Kratos on October 09, 2007, 10:39:22 AM
Precious and sweet. Thank you.

John
Title: Re: a poem
Post by: gatheredfragments on October 10, 2007, 02:56:01 AM
you really think so?

i have another, probably closer to that description.

At your feet my Lord and King,
I put down my "everything".

My knowledge by experience,
Wisdom found in consequence,
Understanding gain and loss,
Carrying willingly my own cross.

My failures in my whole of soul,
Things I say that I should hold,
Arrogance, self-will and pride,
Letting not Your will decide.

Putting down my valued prize,
Your gift I often take in pride,
Chastised in love I put these down,
The beauty of your given crown.

At Your feet my Lord and King,
I put down my "everything".


Title: Re: a poem
Post by: Kept on October 12, 2007, 02:22:36 AM
very nice!

:HeartThrob:

kept