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Offline fullarmor2

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Which poem?
« on: November 04, 2009, 04:19:37 AM »
I have a poem idea,  but I have two different versions.  Which do you think is best. Or do you have an idea to make it better?

A) The ones God has called out and chosen, to be his best, its so he can use them,  to bless ALL the rest. 

B) The ones God has called out and chosen,  to pass Christ's test,  its so he can use them, to bless all the rest.

For all those who live in the shadow of death,  a glorious light has dawned!  And for all those who stumble in the darkness,   behold,   your light has come!!

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Re: Which poem?
« Reply #1 on: November 04, 2009, 04:40:27 AM »